I see a lot of curly-qs. I feel like that might make them look a little too busy. With number 9, I like the thicker lines of b, and the use of the ellipse to tie the letters together, but I would simplify the curly-qs.
I really like number 11 letter b. I think the letters are very clear, but there is a lot of curls going on, you might want to simplify it a little by reducing the amount of curls.
I think number 11 could be successful with a little further development. It may benefit from clean thick lines and making both the initials a bit more individually detectable in the image.
I like #11 as well. It's simple and reminds me of leaves. Some of your other logos are a big complex and might lose some of the details when they are scaled.
I think #4 and #3 are going to produce the best logo, rather than #6, because #6 is very busy. There is a lot going on I cant really see the letters in the design. Whereas in 3 or 4 there is a lot you can do with the width and sizes, which parts to bolden and such. I see a shape in 4a maybe work with the idea that a shape is created and that is the part that is memorable...but wouldn't you want the initials, the business, what the logo represents to be memorable?
I think that all the logos were beautiful and unique. Although I liked number 6 a lot, I think that number 8 stood out to me the most. It just seemed more creative than the rest. I would really like to see how that one turns out.
Numbers 4 and 12 look the strongest to me because they both have really interesting designs but it is still easy to make out what the initials are. They also feel a little more balanced.
I see a lot of curly-qs. I feel like that might make them look a little too busy. With number 9, I like the thicker lines of b, and the use of the ellipse to tie the letters together, but I would simplify the curly-qs.
ReplyDelete#11 works very well for me! Its very simple. If you made the more swirly ones simple then you would have some really cool ones!
ReplyDeleteI really like number 11 letter b. I think the letters are very clear, but there is a lot of curls going on, you might want to simplify it a little by reducing the amount of curls.
ReplyDeleteI think number 11 could be successful with a little further development. It may benefit from clean thick lines and making both the initials a bit more individually detectable in the image.
ReplyDelete9b is cool. I like how you made the lines thicker from 9a. That made it stand out more. The design is very unique.
ReplyDeletei like #11, its simple but i think it would work great as a logo. A lot of the other ones have a look of curls going on and its too busy.
ReplyDeleteI like #11 as well. It's simple and reminds me of leaves. Some of your other logos are a big complex and might lose some of the details when they are scaled.
ReplyDeleteI think #4 and #3 are going to produce the best logo, rather than #6, because #6 is very busy. There is a lot going on I cant really see the letters in the design. Whereas in 3 or 4 there is a lot you can do with the width and sizes, which parts to bolden and such. I see a shape in 4a maybe work with the idea that a shape is created and that is the part that is memorable...but wouldn't you want the initials, the business, what the logo represents to be memorable?
ReplyDeleteI think that all the logos were beautiful and unique. Although I liked number 6 a lot, I think that number 8 stood out to me the most. It just seemed more creative than the rest. I would really like to see how that one turns out.
ReplyDeleteNumbers 4 and 12 look the strongest to me because they both have really interesting designs but it is still easy to make out what the initials are. They also feel a little more balanced.
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